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Because of the success of my predecessors, I am fully convinced that two years of education in Was
Because of the success of my
predecessors, I am fully convinced that two years of education in xxx
University will help me to enhance my research capacity and get well prepared
for my future career.
请问这句话because of 可以这样用吗?会不会很中式英语?

不行,因为because(of)表示的是一种直接的因果关系,而你能否成功与前任的成功只能说是一种类比的关系,而非紧密的因果关系.
这样讲最好:
Based on the success achieved by my predecessors,i m full convinced that the 2 years of education in XXX University equiped me with strengthened research capacity and will pave the way for my future success in the career.

语法没问题;
但觉得意思在逻辑上不是很通,可考虑改成:Judging from(从......判断)the success......

judge from:
从...看
根据...判断

可以这样用,整个句子表达的很好很清晰:)!祝你申请成功!