英语改错提I want to Londer by the train Last summer.During my stay here,the weather was terrible ang there werea la lot of traffic and pollution.we first went shopping in Oxford Street,but I didn't like them.Iwas bored.We then visited to lost of

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I want to Londer by the train Last summer.During my stay here,the weather was terrible ang there werea la lot of traffic and pollution.we first went shopping in Oxford Street,but I didn't like them.Iwas bored.We then visited to lost of museums,which I didn't enioy at all .My aunt might see that I wass very unhappily and decided to take myself to the cinema.We went to see a Disney film in the end.On the thind day we went for a long walk and is was very cold and start to rain.After that I was sick,so I read some comic books of my cousin's indoors and didn't leave the house for rest of my time in London.It wasn't a very good holiday.

I want(went) to Londer（London） by the(去掉the) train last summer.
During my stay here,the weather was terrible and there were(was) a lot of traffic and pollution.
We first went shopping in Oxford Street,but I didn't like them (it).I was bored.
We then visited to(把to去掉) lots of museums,which I didn't enioy at all .
My aunt might see that I was very unhappily（unhappy） and decided to take myself(me) to the cinema.We went to see a Disney film in the end.On the third day we went for a long walk and it was very cold and start(started) to rain.After that I was sick,so I read some comic books of my cousin's indoors and didn't leave the house for (加上the) rest of my time in London.It wasn't a very good holiday.

I went to Londen by train last summer.During my stay there,the weather
was terrible and there were a lot of traffic problems and pollution.
went shopping on Oxford Street, but I didn't l...

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I went to Londen by train last summer.During my stay there,the weather
was terrible and there were a lot of traffic problems and pollution.
went shopping on Oxford Street, but I didn't like it.It was boring.Then,we visited lost of museums that I didn't enioy them at all .My aunt might notice that I was very unhappy and she decided to take me to the cinema. We went to see a Disney film in the end.On the third day we went for a long walk. But it was very cold and started to rain.
After that I was sick,so I read some comic books of my cousin's indoors and didn't leave the house for the rest of my time in London. It wasn't a very good holiday.

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