请大家看看这句话有没有错!Two friends were traveling across the forest,when they met with a bear.这里across 和met with用得对吗?

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请大家看看这句话有没有错!Two friends were traveling across the forest,when they met with a bear.
这里across 和met with用得对吗?

"traveling across "错的,是"walking across"

across 改成through
met后不要with,最好改成saw a bear
附:when改成suddenly后加逗号