The changes in my room 英语作文怎么写?

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The changes in my room 英语作文怎么写?

My room is very dirty before my mom came it, my mum look my room very angry"How dare you didn't clean your room!" So I put my toy down,and begin clean my room very hard, I clean my desk, wash the floor……
Then my mom came in with surprise!"good heaven!"she said,then she look at me"good boy"

一句一句对比着写,比较明显

先描述一下为什么要改,列几点改得好的地方,几点改得不好的地方,最后总结一下改得满意不满意

说说你房间的摆设,作用,什么时候干什么事儿时候用它们,最后说你喜欢你的房间发发感慨什么的。

我房间的变化