英文简历(帮我看一下这几句英文有什么语法等错误)1 .To manipulate the word,and Powerpoint Excell,and other office software.2 .I have strong self learning ability and team cooperation ability3 .In the school each club job cultiv
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英文简历(帮我看一下这几句英文有什么语法等错误)
1 .To manipulate the word,and Powerpoint Excell,and other office software.
2 .I have strong self learning ability and team cooperation ability
3 .In the school each club job cultivating ,I get a good interpersonal communication skills and organizational ability
1.建议改成:Good at manipulating WORD/EXEL/POWERPOINT and other Microsoft Office applications.
原因:to do(动词不定式)一般表示即将.的状态,我觉得这里你要表明的是“已经熟练掌握.”,用good at (精于)更好,还有微软Office软件的Word、Excel和PPT都是应用程序applications不是software
2.建议改成:I am able to adapt to new things soon and work as a good team player.
原因:什么什么的能力不一定都要用have ability来表述,自学能力强建议用“很快适应新的环境、东西”来表述,比纯粹讲自学能力强更好,团队合作能力力,work as a good team player是很多欧美公司地道的讲法
3.建议改成:I've learnt good communication skills and organizational capacity from the School Clubs' activities.
原因:communication skills就是人际沟通能力或技巧的意思,从.中学得、获得用learn from比较好,建议这样改,另外学校各倶乐部的活动用activities取代job更符合英语的表达方式.
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1. very familiar with using WORD,EXCEL,PPT and other office software
2. strong capabilty of self-learning and a good team player
3. from the experience of club management at school, i'm also a good organizer skilled at communication with people
写简历是最好不要在句子里出现第一人称的主语,这样会给人一种过于主观的感觉。
建议:
1.having the skills in Microsoft Office software such as Word, PowerPoint, Excel,etc.
2.having strong self-learning ability and team cooperation a...
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写简历是最好不要在句子里出现第一人称的主语,这样会给人一种过于主观的感觉。
建议:
1.having the skills in Microsoft Office software such as Word, PowerPoint, Excel,etc.
2.having strong self-learning ability and team cooperation ability.
3.having got good interpersonal communication skills and organizational ability through the school club job cultivation.
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第一句没有谓语。。单单用to不行
第二句 可以
第三句改为:in the job cultivation when i was member of school clubs
i can operate Powerpoint, Excell, Word, and other office softwares. Besides, i am good at self learning and team cooperation. in addition, people believe i have amazing organizational ability and interpersonal communication skills. is this a portion of your college essay? GOOD LUCK!! ( if it is a college essay, i think it's kinda vague. be detailed. give specific examples in real life to explain why you are such a talented and skillful person. stop using general words like : good , nice, kind. these words are too well spoken, and they have lost their meanings already) English can be stylish! ------------------------------Hot2resist
1 .To manipulate the word,Powerpoint and Excel,and other office software.
2 .I have strong self learning ability and team cooperation ability
3 .In the school each club job cultivating ,I get good interpersonal communication skills and organizational ability。